3 Environmental Factors needed for survival of my village.(Added)

Luckily, as you can see I've got a comment from my teacher and I realized, I better practice this thing(Because in the future, I'm going to have similar thing.) I looked at some of my friend's work. I found out the difference between me and those friends who got good comments from the teacher. I’ve deicide to add more. I hope you can compare to the last one and find out what I have added.

3 Environmental Factors needed for survival of my village.

Imagine that you are living 200 years in the future. Earth has been invaded by a powerful empire, Akkadiana, but you manage to escape with several friends in a small space ship. Your space ship lands on an unknown planet, but you find that the geography and the environment is just like Earth. The only difference is there are no cities, towns or villages and you and your friends are the only humans here.


Environmental Factor 1: I would look for a river. This brings fertile soil and fresh water to my village. Fertile soil would make the village rich, because fertile soils help the farming and Fresh water would be used to drink, wash and clean clothes. We also can gather foods in river, so we would not have to worry about dying in a hunger. Fish, water birds and animals come to drink are one of foods we can gather in or near river. River would be one of the most important environmental factors to survive.

Environmental Factor 2: I would look for trees, so we can make tools out of them. Making tools would be very important in order to survive in an unknown planet where there are only you and your friends. Also, we can make boats and travel around the planet because there might be better place for our village. We also can make things like beds, chairs, tables, shelters and weapons. Trees would be very useful to us to survive.

Environmental Factor 3: I would look for oceans, so I can travel around the planet and gather things that are not in my village, because there wouldn't be all things around my village. On that planet, gathering things will be very important. As more as you gathered, you will be able to survive longer! As the introduction said, that the planet is just like earth, there must be seasons, so you will need something to protect yourselves from the weathers. For example foxes. but foxes don't live around my village so traveling around the planet will also help us to survive. Oceans would be one of the most important environmental factors to gather thing that help to survive.

3 Environmental Factors needed for survival of my village.

3 Environmental Factors needed for survival of my village.


Environmental Factor 1: I would look for a river. This brings fertile soil and fresh water to my village. Fertile soil would make the village rich and Fresh water would be used to drink for my friends and me. We also can gather foods in river. For examples, fish, water birds and animals come to drink. River would be one of the most important environmental factors to survive.

Environmental Factor 2: I would look for trees, so we can make tools out of them. for example, we can make boats and travel around the planet because there might be better place for our village. We also can make things like beds, chairs, tables, shelters and weapons. Trees would be very useful to us to survive.

Environmental Factor 3: I would look for oceans, so I can travel around the planet and gather things that are not in my village, because there wouldn't be all things around my village. Maybe foxes don't live around my village and in winter we might need animal skins to protect ourselves from the weather. Oceans would be one of the most important environmental factors to gather thing that help to survive.